Tuesday, July 27, 2010

What's so great about a piece of paper?

Once there was a boy named Chris who hated to excersize, eat healthy, or do any good things.  His dad was not happy.  One day Chris' dad found a glittery rainbow piece of paper in his drawer.  He decided to write on it:
I wish Chris would learn how important it is to eat healthy and excersize.  I wish he could also learn how to listen to his parents and follow directions all of the time.
                    2 MINUTES LATER
"Chris, finish your veggies!!"Chris' dad said with a frown.
"Yes dad!"Chris replied.
That's a miracle!! That paper must have been magical,Chris' dad thought.  The next day Chris did everything that he was supposed to do that day.  He even finished his chores and brought in the trash.  It went on for a week, but then the paper went away.  Oh-no! Wait..................Chris still had the good manners that he needed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Chris kept doing what he was supposed to and became what Chris' dad wanted from him!
Sorry I didn't write for a while!! Gone to Vancouver and Seattle for vacation!!

Wednesday, July 7, 2010

What Time Is It?

Once there was a boy named Tyler who was 7 years old. "GO JAWS!! GO JAWS!!!" everyone cheered. Tyler's mom was recording his soccer match. I have to make my team win today. I just have to!! Tyler thought running in front of the goal as goalie. The loud screech of the whistle blew and the match started. The Lions started off. The ball came flying toward him in the air. Tyler just stared at the ball as it smacked him in the face and rolled into the goal. Tyler's mom and coach came running toward him as The Lions high-fived, clapped, and laughed. His team members gasped and shouted insults at him. There was a big bruise on Tyler's cheek. Tyler went back home. It was night. Tyler pulled his dad to his room. "Come on dad! Read me a story!" Tyler said.
"Wait honey!"his dad replied as he kept talking to his mom. Tyler ran to his room and propped himself onto his bed. "I wish I could use a remote and go to the parts of my life that I wanted to go to,"Tyler said as sparkles fell over him,"What on Earth! A shooting star!" Out of no where a remote appeared in front of him. "Cool!"Tyler said pressing 16. Suddenly wind whipped passed his face. He was in a silver car. Palm trees surrounded him as he drove al0ng the road. "This thing works by age!"Tyler said excitedly.  Tyler pushed down 7 and was once again sitting in his room. "Oh, there you are!"Tyler's dad said sitting down next to him. 
"Here I am!"Tyler said smiling.

Friday, July 2, 2010

A Magical Story

One day a girl named Ashley who was ten years old was going out for dinner with her family. She wanted to edit her story that she was going to publish but she was tired. She needed help, but no one offered. She sat down with her story on the table while the waiter served her parents water and her brother a glass of lemonade. Her brother, Zach, was not drinking correctly. Her dad said,"Zach, use your manners!" As he reached over he knocked down his glass and spilled the water all over Ashley's paper. "Oh-no! Dad! Why did you do that! Ugh! It will never dry!" she cried. Tears rolled down her face. "It will dry! Stop crying,"their mom said. Ashley put the paper on the shelf. Suddenly, a bright light flashed over all of the papers. They ate there and when they were done with their food, she picked up her papers that were now dry. "Yes! It's dry!"she said excitedly. But the papers looked different. There were no more mistakes in her story anymore. The bright light had edited her story. "My paper is done! Tomerrow we will go publish it!"said Ashley.


"Okay,"said her dad. They drove off into the night to go home.